tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17507965.post6856845751642829062..comments2023-11-02T06:46:03.627-05:00Comments on bliss: towards a delicious life: fall back...dharmagirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11601284344804143589noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17507965.post-51492294039474954832007-11-05T18:18:00.000-06:002007-11-05T18:18:00.000-06:00To edit the above comment:Not rhyming, but repeati...To edit the above comment:<BR/><BR/>Not rhyming, but repeating/rewording, expanding a thought or stating the opposite.<BR/><BR/>:)Yes, my kids are homeskooldAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17507965.post-43506977129881136152007-11-05T18:16:00.000-06:002007-11-05T18:16:00.000-06:00Your poem! How sad, so fitting for this cold, drea...Your poem! How sad, so fitting for this cold, dreary season. <BR/><BR/>The kids have been working on writing Hebrew poetry, not rhyming repeating/rewording, expanding a thought or stating the opposite.<BR/><BR/>Here is a sample (without editing)<BR/><BR/>Horses<BR/><BR/>A. Beautiful, gentle<BR/>A. Fast, strong<BR/>B. Jumping, running<BR/>C. Working and tame<BR/>B. Galoping, walking<BR/>C. Free and wild<BR/><BR/>Any tips? Poetry has been intimidating to say the least.<BR/><BR/>Your Dear Aunt B.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com